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Tuesday, June 26, 2012

All Write 2012 - Tuesday Slice of Life

My slice of life this week spans a three day period last week when I was an attendee at the All Write Summer Institute in Warsaw, Indiana.  These three days enriched my life as a teacher in ways I never expected.  This post is just one more attempt to process some of the powerful learning that occurred in those three days.

Much like Franki, my actual learning and professional conversations started way before I ever reached Warsaw, Indiana.  The two and a half hour drive from Dublin, Ohio, to Warsaw, Indiana, with Tony and Franki was nonstop talk about books, technology, and good practices in the classroom.  I can't tell you how many notes I jotted down in Evernote as one good idea after another bounced around the car.

The first evening there was a dinner for some twitter friends who were attending the institute.  Though most of the conversation at my table was getting to know each other, there were also some big topics addressed.  But the best part about this evening was getting to know people a little more personally whom I normally just have 140 character conversations with on twitter.

There are many Columbus area friends and twitter friends that push my thinking on a regular basis.  It was so delightful to see them all gathered in one location first at dinner, and then in the PAC to start the All Write Institute:

Thursday, the institute started with the keynote speaker, Ruth Ayres.  I was so happy to start my day with Ruth's thoughtful and wise words.  Whether she realizes it or not, Ruth has changed my life as a writing teacher in profound ways.  I heard her speak for the first time this past February at the Dublin Literacy Conference, and her passion for writing and children was so evident.  Her session convinced me to try the March Slice of Life Challenge, and after March, to continue with the Tuesday Slice of Life Challenge, at Two Writing Teachers, the blog she shares with Stacey.

But I digress.  In Ruth's keynote, her big message was STORY MATTERS.  We all have stories to tell, and a good writing workshop allows our students to tell their stories, and we should be sharing our story as well.  What a perfect way to start All Write!

 The first session I went to was Franki Sibberson's about Comprehension in a Digital Reading Workshop.  One of the messages I took away from Franki's session was if we’re asking students to just do shallow assignments with technology, that's not what we want; we want the technology to change the ways students think, allow them to think in deeper and more meaningful ways.  I also loved her session because she gave so many specific examples of ways to incorporate technology into all aspects of reading workshop.

I mentioned earlier that I took notes in Evernote.  However, when I got home, I transferred my thinking to a chart - one side was what I heard from the various presenters, the other side was what my action plan might be.  The following is just a miniscule part of my take-aways and action plans from Franki's session:



 My next session I listened to Jim Burke, a high school English teacher.  I had several take-aways from Jim.  First, it is so important to scaffold learning for students, especially when they're trying to learn about something in which they have no background knowledge.  I loved how he responded to students' writing while in progress -- he used a different tool, but made me wonder if having students compose in GoogleDocs so that we could have a conversation about the piece, might not have merit.  I know that when I write, I love it when an editor has that type of dialogue with me.  Something to think about.

I ended Thursday listening to Franki again, this time speaking about mini-lessons.  I've heard her talk about this topic before, but it was amazing how much more I took out of her presentation this time (much the same way I get more out of books during a reread).  The biggest message I took away this time is the importance of having multiple texts to teach a similar lesson.  Also, how important it is to be thoughtful about the books or texts you do choose so that you are building scaffolds into their learning.  Though I do plan day by day, based on how a mini-lesson went on any given day, the idea of having the "skeleton" of a unit of mini-lessons and a huge collection of supporting books for those lessons, will be a goal for me this year.

Thursday evening we had the opportunity to dine together again and listen to Ralph Fletcher speak.  I love his passion for notebooks and gathering what is in the world around you into that notebook.  But, much like the car ride here, more good learning took place after the actual hours of the institute.  When we went back to the hotel, I had an opportunity to meet some wonderful teachers from Princeton Day School in New Jersey.  They were a very cohesive third grade team, and I loved having a conversation with them about workshop (even though it was a little hard to hear, because it was also karaoke night in the bar :) ).  It's so great when you start the time together as strangers and end up bouncing ideas off one another.

The first session on Friday was Ralph Fletcher speaking about mentor texts.  I loved his thoughts about how poetry writing can be a great way for students to focus on the language of writing.  It is for that reason that I started my writing workshop last year with poetry, and after hearing Ralph say this, plan on doing the same again this year.

One of my favorite speakers on Friday was Ruth Ayres.  The title of her presentation was "Nudging Joy."  What a great title, and what a wonderful mantra by which to live.  My other two favorite things she said:
  • the best PD teachers can do is to develop ourselves as readers and writers
  • ***are we celebrating with our student writers or are we only trying to change them???*** 
Such smart thinking -- I will be processing this for a long time to come.

The last session of the day I spent with Donalyn Miller, of Book Whisperer fame.  I love how she's pushing our thinking as reading teachers once again.  It's not enough to get our kids hooked on reading and put great books into their hands; we need to teach them how to be independent readers.  If we can do that, that skill will last them a lifetime. 

So, there you have it -- my reflection on the All Write Summer Institute.

Wow, this was a little more long-winded than I expected.  My apologies.  But my adrenaline is still running strong from all that I learned last week.  How can it still be June, just a few weeks since last year finished, and I am this re-invigorated?!!  Attending the All Write Summer Institute was an amazing gift.

Franki was right in her post yesterday, that there did appear to be an unintentional, but incredibly powerful, theme that emerged from the institute: we need to bring joy into our own lives and that of our students.  We can't get caught up solely in all the mandates and pressures that surround us; we need to get to know each of our students, and celebrate who they are as readers and writers.

I think that's a huge message, and one I plan to hold on to all year long!

Thanks to Ruth and Stacey for hosting us on Tuesdays -- I'm delighted to be continuing my membership in this writing community that meets every week for Slice of Life Tuesday







Wednesday, July 23, 2008

An Early Bus Trip and Naming Liberty

About a month ago, I blogged about Greetings From the 50 States by Sheila Keenan. I was blogging in honor of my blog partner, Bill's, trip to Boston with a motorcoach bus full of 5th and 6th graders to Boston for 4 days. Now, a month later, my time has come. Tomorrow morning (Thursday), I will be joining Bill on the bus to Boston (I have to be there by 5:45...AM!!!!). I will be leaving behind three nonfiction picture book reviews for your enjoyment (hopefully, you'll be reading them sometime loooong after 5:45!).

In keeping with the patriotic nature of this trip, the first book I'd like to talk about is Naming Liberty by Jane Yolen and illustrated by Jim Burke. I've been reading a lot on other blogs lately about the book Lady Liberty by Doreen Rappoport, and Naming Liberty seems like a perfect companion book to share with that one.

Naming Liberty is a fabulous book, with multiple entry points:

1) There are two different story lines on each double-page layout. The left side is told by a little girl in first person narrative. She and her family are hoping to immigrate to America from the Ukraine. The right side is about Frederic Auguste Bartholdi, the creator and designer of the Statue of Liberty. This side is about the vision of Lady Liberty, and how that vision became a reality.

2) Both parts of the story are written in verse format. What a great model for children with their own nonfiction writing!!!

3) The little girl's story line is all about immigration -- families wanting to come to America for a better life, saving up money over several years to afford the passage, sending some family members before others, some changing of culture and heritage when reaching America (specifically how names got changed), working at menial labor in America, the boat ride to the new country being difficult at times.

4) Being able to compare 2 wonderful texts about the same topic -- Naming Liberty and Lady Liberty. Taking the time to really do some comparing and contrasting of the 2 books will be a great lesson for the writers in your classroom.

5) Jim Burke did some fabulous paintings for this book -- the conversation of how his illustrations enhance Yolen's text would be great!

6) Naming Liberty gave me goosebumps of pride as I realized what an incredible symbol the Statue of Liberty is (and has been) to so many people!

7) At the end of the text, we find out which parts of the story were based on true stories from Yolen's family. I don't know why I love information like this, but I really do!

I loved this book, and can't wait to buy my own copy (I borrowed mine from the library)! It makes me happy to know how many great nonfiction texts there are available now for children. Naming Liberty fits that category -- it makes history accessible and significant for children. Therefore, it becomes a must, must have for my classroom!!!

***In addition to this amazing book, the Yolen / Burke team will be releasing Johnny Appleseed at the end of August (for my review, click here).

Monday, June 30, 2008

Johnny Appleseed


I was fortunate enough to read an advance review copy of Johnny Appleseed written by the incomparable Jane Yolen, illustrated by the very talented Jim Burke, and published by Harper Collins. It was one of the many ARCs that Sally, the owner of Cover to Cover, allowed us to preview during the 48 Hour Challenge. I absolutely fell in love with this book!!

Most of us are familiar with the legend of Johnny Appleseed, but Jane Yolen digs deeper, and gives a text that is much more than just the legend. She divides his life into small segments, each segment taking up a 2 page spread. Each segment begins with a couple of lines from what I imagine is a song about the legend of Johnny Appleseed, about 4 - 5 lines. Then, using a lovely verse format, Yolen tells the actual history of what was happening to John Chapman during that time frame -- this part of the page is called "The History". Finally, at the bottom of the page, there is "The Fact" -- this is more true information, written as factual sentences.

I learned so much about John Chapman by reading Yolen's text. I was amazed at how little I knew about him, other than his legend. Yolen's details are quite wonderful! I have to imagine that much research went into writing this book. She points out that the true facts about Johnny Appleseed are even more impressive than the legend. After reading her book, I would have to agree with that statement. And Jim Burke's illustrations are the icing on the cake -- truly fabulous!

This book, Johnny Appleseed, would be a great find for many 4th grade teachers I know, as they teach about folk heroes in Ohio. It would be a nice learning opportunity to share with students the difference between what's real and what's legend. For me, the book will have a different purpose -- it is yet another great mentor text to share with my 5th grade students when studying literary nonfiction.

Johnny Appleseed should be in bookstores this August. It would be a terrific addition to any library!